Oh wow, that was hot! You write really well, it just reads very easily. And UNF @ hood of a car, holy cow. :JKLSND:AJKFH
Love this line: Tommy's never going to get used to how little Adam talks this way: when he's doing the fucking he never shuts up, offers encouragements and endearments and pretty babble and murmured promises, but get a dick in him and it's all hitched gasps and breathy whimpers, hands flinging out to scrabble against the hood as Tommy gets his own foot up on the bumper to up the ante.
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Date: 2010-02-26 08:01 am (UTC)And UNF @ hood of a car, holy cow. :JKLSND:AJKFH
Love this line: Tommy's never going to get used to how little Adam talks this way: when he's doing the fucking he never shuts up, offers encouragements and endearments and pretty babble and murmured promises, but get a dick in him and it's all hitched gasps and breathy whimpers, hands flinging out to scrabble against the hood as Tommy gets his own foot up on the bumper to up the ante.