Charity Drabbles: 3 of 6 - Lambliff tattoo porn

[linzeestyle]

amayse paid five dollars for 500 words of Lambliff from Tommy's POV (which is what I always write in anyway, so that worked out nicely!), and gave me a bunch of wonderful prompts. From those I chose:

body modification and leggy.

I am going through a...phase...with Adam bottoming. I don't know why. I think I'm going to post this and Hey Pretty to teamlambliff and atom_fic later as a Lambliff Double Feature -- alternately, I'll wait until the third and final of my Lambliff drabbles are done.

In the meantime, have some porn!

Little Rock and Roll
(Adam/Tommy)(NC-17)(1283)

Fifteen hours before bus call, Adam decides he wants a fucking tattoo. Tommy follows because -- well, shit, there's no reason he wouldn't.

The artist's a friend, which works out pretty well because it means there aren't cameras, nobody tipped off paparazzi looking for new ink and fresh scandal. It's a relief, but it's also kind of a mind-fuck: Tommy's been following Adam around to basically everything in LA, and somehow he's stayed so far off the radar not even Perez has made the congrats, here's your toaster joke Tommy's been waiting for for weeks. It's kind of nuts, and Tommy's pretty sure Adam has something to do with it -- beautiful, talented, love-everybody Adam, who protects everyone from the crazy shit he threw himself into, never mind maybe some people actually knew what they were signing onto.

It's awesome anyway, though, because...shit. Tommy gets Adam.

Adam drags Tommy into the parlor with tight fingers around his wrist, already knows what he wants and had his buddy draw up the picture. Tommy knows he's staring, but Adam wouldn't have brought him if he wasn't expected to look, right? Slouched low in the chair, head thrown back and legs sprawled for fucking miles -- Tommy swallows and bites the inside of his cheek, stares at whorls of ink and pinpricks of blood as the color flares and expands on Adam's skin.

"How does it look?" Adam's eyes are still closed, lying back against the head rest, but there's a smile playing on the corner of his mouth and Tommy thinks, busted at the same time he thinks, so fucking what.

"You know it's gorgeous," he says, and Adam's smile twitches like he knows not even Tommy's sure if he's talking about the ink or the skin on which its blooming.

They've only barely made it back to Adam's car before Tommy is dragging him around it, yanking until Adam's against the hood and then crowding closer until he hops up onto it. Tommy's already between his legs, and Adam tips his head back again like he did in the chair, fingers dragging with bite through Tommy's hair.

"I knew you'd be into it."

He sounds pleased with himself and Tommy grabs him by the lapels, pulls him forward and crushes their mouths together. "Shut up," he growls between bites to Adam's skin and the fact that Adam does, whimpers and opens his mouth for Tommy, is hot all by itself. Tommy reaches down to get his fingers into Adam's back pocket, gets a hold of his wallet and presses it into Adam's hand. "Tell me you've got shit for this." Adam pulls out a condom and a packet of Wet and Tommy grabs them back and kisses Adam again. "Awesome." His other hand comes down to tug at the waist of Adam's jeans. "Lose the pants."

Adam laughs, arching his hips and letting Tommy do the work. His jeans are fucking tight, and Tommy just wants to get laid, already. He gets them down his hips and off one leg and Adam cackles and brings his newly-freed leg up to brace against the bumper, scooting up a little on the hood of the car. "So this is a little public," he says with a twisted smile -- even though it's not, because they're in a back alley at two in the morning.

"Yeah well, just don't fucking talk and maybe nobody will hear you." Adam laughs again, and Tommy tears the lube packet and slicks his fingers, pushing Adam's thigh up and shoving two fingers into him.

"Oh, God. Like that."

"You really just can't stop talking, can you?" Tommy curls his fingers and twists, viciously, watches the way Adam's head falls back, the way his thighs fall open like for all his bossy top shit he was made to get fucked. "Here, get this open for me." Tommy grabs the condom packet and shoves it into Adam's shaking hand, pulls his fingers away and wipes them dry on Adam's bunched-up jeans. Getting the condom on takes too damn long and Tommy really kind of misses not having to worry about that shit -- but it's probably messy with a dude, and whatever this is or isn't with Adam, nobody's ever gonna say the word exclusive.

Tommy bites down on the thought of the word and digs his fingers into Adam's hips to drag him forward; he's all long legs and gorgeous body and one day Tommy's going to figure out how to fuck him standing up, but for now this is close enough. He holds his breath as he sinks inside, eyes squeezed shut the way he always does this, because it's still too damn surreal to do any other way. When he's in it's Adam's fingers on his cheek that make him open his eyes and look again, Adam's palm leaving scuffs on the glass of the windshield that Tommy concentrates on when he starts to fuck into him.

"Jesus, you feel fucking fantastic--" he cuts off when Adam kisses him, hard, like he wants him to stop talking or just likes it better when it's quiet. Tommy's never going to get used to how little Adam talks this way: when he's doing the fucking he never shuts up, offers encouragements and endearments and pretty babble and murmured promises, but get a dick in him and it's all hitched gasps and breathy whimpers, hands flinging out to scrabble against the hood as Tommy gets his own foot up on the bumper to up the ante.

"You're gonna come first," Tommy pants, hand sliding to grip Adam's dick and jerk him off. He fucking means it, too, and it's a pride thing maybe but it's the best part -- Adam's body like a vice-grip and his expression slack and shocked, and yeah, a little wrecked and Tommy did that -- but Tommy also loves the after-part, the way where Adam's oversensitive and wild-eyed and locks his legs tight around Tommy's waist and begs for him to keep moving. Adam's fingernails scratch his biceps and his foot digs hard into the muscle of Tommy's thigh, and Tommy thinks, this is worth it, whatever he signed up for that lets him keep on seeing this. He keeps his jizz-covered hand on Adam's softening dick and fucks him harder still; his own orgasm slams into him like his own private wall of sound, making him tense and shudder and curl into Adam's expectant, shaky arms.

"Oh my God."

It comes out breathy, moments or seconds or maybe a fucking hour later, Adam's breath ruffling Tommy's sweaty hair as he giggles in surprise. It's impressive as shit, because Tommy's not so sure he's got words back, at this point. He just grunts in agreement and mouths at the skin of Adam's collar, right where the bandage starts that covers his new tattoo. Oroborus, Adam had said, like Tommy even knows how to spell it: snake eating its tail. Inevitability, you know?

"Fucking oroborus. It's for temptation. Snake and the apple." Tommy lifts his head up, eyeing Adam through hazy vision. "Awesome."

Adam beams up at him, hands brushing fondly at his hair. "I was going to put it on a tree branch, but I thought....too much?"

"It's perfect. You're perfect. Just..." Tommy buries his face back in Adam's sweaty t-shirt. His dick's soft, and the condom feels slimy and kind of cool in the night air, and his hips are cramping a little and his thighs are gonna hurt tomorrow. He's pretty sure he could do this forever, and if that makes him a complete idiot, then fucking whatever. "M'here for the ride."

Comments

[emmuzka.livejournal.com]

Sigh. Adam bottoming: My latest kink. I like the way you write sex, it reads really intense but without too much details.

[linzeestyle.livejournal.com]

Over-description in porn is my fannish allergy -- I mean, I like a good dirty-hot NC-17 porn, but details being hot only works if you're very careful with what details you emphasize. The hottest porn I've ever read is still probably adellyna and wishpaper's "Let the Record Show," for just that reason. It's hard to get right, but it's so easy to get wrong. I have clicked out of many a story because there were, say...actual descriptions of anuses.

Which is neither here nor there, but ha. Apparently I have feelings about this (I blame Porn Battle, getting me all riled up about this subject). Thank you. :D

Adam bottoming is....guh. Only for some pairings, though - I'm still a little 'eh' on Kris topping him, for some reason! I have no idea why. D:

Linzee

[cyrtanthus.livejournal.com]

I so agree. I've read fics where they described someone's asshole as "winking" at them and I'm like... Am I still supposed to be turned on?

LOL

[citrus-vanille.livejournal.com]

Mm. I like that you like Adam bottoming. It doesn't get written enough, and it's hot.

Good luck with all the writing you've got to do! I was thinking about trying to write for porn battle this time around, but I've still got writer's block, so I'm not actually getting anything done.

[alwaysaddled.livejournal.com]

Oh, the visuals in this story are amazing. I kept thinking about that picture of Adam with the headphones and the legs for miles.

[alwaysaddled.livejournal.com]

Also, is there a general Adam fic community? I'll read Adam/anyone (I was like this about Patrick in bandom; I fixate on one person and am flexible about pairings). I can fuid Adam/Kris but other pairings are harder to find.

[linzeestyle.livejournal.com]

glambert_fic. Also, atom_fic for Adam/Tommy (there's teamlambliff as well, but it's closed membership right now IIRC, due to some trolling directed at it :( ).

[alwaysaddled.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

(And thanks for not making fun of "fuid." I'm not even sure I know how I got to "fuid" trying to type "find".)

[gypsy-scribbles.livejournal.com]

Lovely, my dear. :)

[linzeestyle.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :D

(PS - you should try porn battle! *g* I know you're not one for PWP, but it's a great way to play around with Lambliff a little before going for full stories. It doesn't even HAVE to be porn, technically. Also, it's my favorite time of the year [like Christmas] and I'm trying to get my favorite writers in this fandom to join me, lol ;)).

[gypsy-scribbles.livejournal.com]

Porn-Christmas, hee!

I looked at the link, and it looks fun, but tbh I'm a bit turned off by the formatting! So damn confusing! I wish that it was hosted on LJ, and that there was more orginization of dif prompts/fandoms. A little discouraging, that!

Still, it's a fun idea! And it might be a nice way to dabble in Lambliff, as you said!

[cathalin.livejournal.com]

Hot. Hot, hot, hot. Adam+car+tattoo, yum.:) I like what you do with Tommy's thoughts, how he's just blown away by Adam and signed up for wherever it takes him.

[hockeychick57.livejournal.com]

Tommy's never going to get used to how little Adam talks this way: when he's doing the fucking he never shuts up, offers encouragements and endearments and pretty babble and murmured promises, but get a dick in him and it's all hitched gasps and breathy whimpers, hands flinging out to scrabble against the hood as Tommy gets his own foot up on the bumper to up the ante.

unfff

[atomic-dawn.livejournal.com]

Loved it. Very hot. Toppy!Tommy = UNF

[no-detective.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOD, OFFICIALLY NEW KINK.

AND IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT.

(Okay, there's also the fact that Tommy Joe really likes to do the throat-grabbing thing - to random kissy chicks, to Adam in the Vevo ad, plus he's got Dracula doing it on his Twitter background pic... AUGH. I am but a weak, weak woman.)

[ohfreckle.livejournal.com]

Ungh, I think I just developed a kink for toppy Tommy \o/

[argeneau.livejournal.com]

Awwwww linzee bb, I <3 u sfm! I was so happy when you wrote With Teeth because at that time, not many ppl were writing Lambliff and then you, one of my fave writers created that epic story *sighs*

I'm glad that it wasn't just a one off, I adore your Tommy character/voice, seems very accurate to his personality as seen on Myspace (although he's been pretty much a doll on Twitter), there isn't enough bottom!Adam fic because tbh, not many people can write it successfully but you can my dear :) And we both know that Tommy wouldn't just roll over and be a bottom twink for anyone, not even Adam so I'm happy you have him forceful and dommy in this. And anything involving tattoos or piercings is a big plus lol!

Can't wait for you to post it at teamlambliff, I will probably reread and flail all over it again :D x

[scribblinlenore.livejournal.com]

I've been really busy at work today, and I had one of those rebellious I need a second for me moments, and I thought: If only there was some good Adam/Tommy to read. And then I remembered that I had your story waiting for me. And yay! I really like your Tommy voice and the way Adam gets quiet when he's the one getting fucked. And of course, there's the sheer hotness of it all. I say again: Yay!

[revid.livejournal.com]

One of the things that I really like about this story is how Tommy is aware that every little thing about his relationship with Adam is crazy, but every time his response is IDGAF. Which is probably a completely true to life characterization of Tommy Joe Ratliff.

Also, this:
Tommy's never going to get used to how little Adam talks this way: when he's doing the fucking he never shuts up, offers encouragements and endearments and pretty babble and murmured promises, but get a dick in him and it's all hitched gasps and breathy whimpers, hands flinging out to scrabble against the hood as Tommy gets his own foot up on the bumper to up the ante.

Not only is it UNF-able as previously mentioned, I read this and nodded my head, because if it isn't trufax, I'll eat my metaphorical hat.

and one day Tommy's going to figure out how to fuck him standing up

Telephone Books?

[bones-2-be.livejournal.com]

Damn that's hot. I love the way you write them, very minimalist, but very effective.

[insomniac-19.livejournal.com]

This TOTALLY worked for me and usually I'm very DNW on Adam bottoming fic but I love the way you write porn so that I can believe it. I loved this!

[thrace-adams.livejournal.com]

This was really good and one of the best characterizations I've seen of Tommy. Really brilliant stuff!

[stolenglimpse.livejournal.com]

I like the description of Adam being quiet when he bottoms and not being so quiet when he tops. I've read that in a few fics already and I really like that. Like, Adam might wanna say stuff but doesn't because he just want to enjoy it? I don't know but I really like that.

And, yeah, Tommy would get hot for a new tattoo. On Adam :)

[fairfax-verde.livejournal.com]

I love that you're writing Adam/Tommy. Seeing Adam through Tommy's eyes here was so gorgeous, (It's kind of nuts, and Tommy's pretty sure Adam has something to do with it -- beautiful, talented, love-everybody Adam, who protects everyone from the crazy shit he threw himself into, never mind maybe some people actually knew what they were signing onto.) and wow with the really convincing me here on the Bottom!Adam thing. I'm breathless.

[demolition-lexi.livejournal.com]

O.O TATTOO PORN!!! OMG!!!! *flails* *pants*

OMG.... just.. fuck. Tattoo porn AND bottom!Adam in one, omg, I'm done, just.. you can.. mop me off the floor now. Oh my god. YES! Yes. :) You're uhm, my new favorite. =D

[autumnsparkle.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, that was hot! You write really well, it just reads very easily.
And UNF @ hood of a car, holy cow. :JKLSND:AJKFH

Love this line: Tommy's never going to get used to how little Adam talks this way: when he's doing the fucking he never shuts up, offers encouragements and endearments and pretty babble and murmured promises, but get a dick in him and it's all hitched gasps and breathy whimpers, hands flinging out to scrabble against the hood as Tommy gets his own foot up on the bumper to up the ante.

[pyrosgf.livejournal.com]

Delicious.

Going through the comments I actually had quite the giggle at your mentioning people describing anuses. I'm all about description and imagery when I write and I sometimes get a tad long-winded... but of all the things you would want to go in detail about I don't think an anus should be it.

*snorts* Yep anyway lovely fic. Love Adam bottoming... love the fact that it's outside on a car. Kinda expect it to be like and old 50's model for some cliched reason.